Tag: Writing

Spy Mouse

One day there was a tiny white mouse who lived in a small house. His name was bob. The mouse was so tiny that he could walk steel staff without no one noticing. Once he stole a very very special  diamond ring even though no one noticed not even one person.  But one day he got caught by someone. It was an old man who was a karate master. He could catch anything with chopsticks also with closed eyes. He could kick people’s bum bum. The mouse was about to steal 10 million$  but the old man caught him. He had to go to jail. In jail the mouse was really angry.

 

Immersion Recount Draft.

Term 4  Immersion Assembly

 

On  Monday morning we had an assembly but not just any assembly like on fridays. It was a Monday immersion assembly. where the teachers were going to perform their funny and silly moves. It was the year 1,2,3,4,5.6 teachers that performed. They kind of did the same thing but a little different. First was the year 1 teachers they did a performance about a superhero

For The birds

                      

Group Members: Harmony  Alex T  Isla  isabella Azahn

 

Part 1: The Characters
Keven and bob: Mean , rude, builles
NARRATOR: ( Telling the story )
Jeffry: Silly, friendly, Kind,
All the birds (15) ( They are mean tiny and rude And Bullies ) 

 

 


Part 3: The Script

 

As a team, begin writing what you think the character’s are saying.  Remember to write the character’s name first followed by a colon (press shift and the key to the right of the L) before writing the spoken text.  

 

Narrator: It was a hot and sunny day and the corn was blowing in the breeze. 

 

Bob  ,yawning, good morning guys

 

Kevin: oh good morning your finally awake                                                                                  

 

Bob: yeah but how long was i asleep 

 

Kevin: umm probably about an hour ?

 

Narrator: The birds all look behind them and say good morning Bob says good morning  back .

 

Jeffry: ( jeffry comes on the power line to the middle ) Hello can i play with you guys

 

Bob: no you smell

The line starts to drop into and the little birds start to get squas

Bob:  you’re squishing me

Jefry slips off the line so he is hanging by his claws

Bob looks at Kevin and they start pecking at his claws

Other birds: Go faster. Oops we’re slipping

Kevin: Oh dear,

Jefry is getting closer to the ground.                                             

Other birds: Noooo we”r going to fall

And the line go’s ping. Then they  flew up into the sky and then fell down. All their feathers went down and (Jeffry laugh at the birds)